THE PLOT THICKENS. LIKE PUDDING O_O I still adore the sad Miki faces. He looks genuinely upset :C Rafi looks pretty upset too haha He’s even got furrow lines between his brows! sweet (Rafeal: *TAKES ANGER OUT ON UNSUSPECTING PRETTY GIANT MUSHROOM*)
I didn’t think that I’d like your whole hand-drawn text, but it’s really grown on me. Though you might want to make it just a tad neater. I thought Rafeal said ‘lacking her up’ but then I realized that that didn’t make any sense.
Also, Miki in the second panel. Perfect “D:” face.
Originally I was going to blur her in that panel, like a depth of field effect. So I didn’t put much effort into the drawing, since it wouldn’t even matter after blurring… but, well, the depth of field actually ended up looking like junk, so I just left it off. Hence the low quality Rei. xD I’ll probably touch it up later.
Joyride is the tale of Rei, a nurse who gets lost in another galaxy where medicine is barely understood and her knowledge has the certain power to change everything.
THE PLOT THICKENS. LIKE PUDDING O_O I still adore the sad Miki faces. He looks genuinely upset :C Rafi looks pretty upset too haha He’s even got furrow lines between his brows! sweet (Rafeal: *TAKES ANGER OUT ON UNSUSPECTING PRETTY GIANT MUSHROOM*)
Rafi: Oh Mr. Mushroom, you’re the only one who understands me.
…Sorry, that’s really the best comment I could come up with. XD
I didn’t think that I’d like your whole hand-drawn text, but it’s really grown on me. Though you might want to make it just a tad neater. I thought Rafeal said ‘lacking her up’ but then I realized that that didn’t make any sense.
Also, Miki in the second panel. Perfect “D:” face.
Personally, I think Rei is a little too sketchy looking on the outlines… which is what I don’t get, because the other characters aren’t like that. :|
Originally I was going to blur her in that panel, like a depth of field effect. So I didn’t put much effort into the drawing, since it wouldn’t even matter after blurring… but, well, the depth of field actually ended up looking like junk, so I just left it off. Hence the low quality Rei. xD I’ll probably touch it up later.
Rafi: I HATE MUSHROOMS D<<<<< THEY'RE NOT GOOD IN SOUPS
Miki would have defeated her in a children's card game